Two True

Blog fog

Flow – no

Why? sigh

Busy tizzy

Tired mired

Taut thought

Blank tank

Rest best

Ahhhhh…..

New view

Shifting lifting

Clearing nearing

Mind find

Poem roam

Glimmer shimmer

Slew-o duo

Grow slow

Go whoa

Write might

Done fun

I won

8 thoughts on “Two True

  1. Oh the early spring fog! I like your poem – perfect for today.
    We leave Duluth today and the city is completely fogged in. Can’t see the bridge which is 5 houses down the road. It could be an interesting drive today!

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  2. Highly concentrated meaning here, and you know I have a preference for form poetry. Most of these lines would count as spondees and to convey so much in lines of monometer is highly artful. My favorite portion is “Tired mired / Taut thought / Blank tank / Rest best.”

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    1. Thank you, Paul. Coming off of Read Me a Story Day and reading Dr. Seuss almost daily as our Author of the Month, this just seemed to almost compose itself. It was lurking in the fog, it just needed an opportune time to present itself!

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